Final Draft

The comments we found most helpful were the ones that had suggestions and pointed out all the things they liked specifically.

The changes we actually did were changing three of the pictures and adding in a few more and adding the bibliography.

We probably would film a bit more if we had the time, and get a few shots to be in the examples of types of cyberbullies.

If we had the chance to do the project all over again, we would probably just add in more film instead of so many pictures.

We came to find out how much of a time consuming process this can be and just how hard it can be to work together under stress.

We feel that we did the best we could do, and we are pretty pleased with the final product.

Rough Draft

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NqFqn-OWJ9k&feature=colike

This is the rough draft of our cyberbullying video. We were actually pretty pleased with how it turned out. We were proud of the voice over and the transitions. We read through the comments and read their suggestions. Some suggested that we add in more about sexting, but we dismissed that and decided we would focus on cyberbullying for now. For the most part we just need to change a few pictures and add the bibliography. Thank you to everyone who helped and thank you to those who commented.