Rough Draft of Values Video

1) We are trying to represent the value of speaking up for others when they cannot to protect them from harm of any sort and to help continue a sense of peace and helpful kindness in what are supposed to be safe environments.
2) I think our group did the editing well for what we have done and that we have also helped add comedy to our video by simply being ourselves and dealing with our circumstances as best we could (having two female bullies for a male student).
3) We still need to complete a chunk of editing for Zach's role in the video, and we also still need to add some music for the opening of the video since we had decided to do so.
4) We are most in need of feedback for how the video flows and if the ending is any good, or even funny at all. We also would like to know if the camera angles are any good or if they make any sense with the video.
5) We found first that we needed an extra person to play a role in our video. How we addressed this was that I asked my friend Michaela to be part of the group. She became our Bully 2. This also presented another awkward predicament, how would people react to having two females bully one male student? How we got around this? Just going with it, the portrayal of the bullying was believeable enough to think that both bullies were simply mean and looking for someone to pick on. Another issuse I was worried about, was if the lighting was going to be off due to weather. The first day we were scheduled to film was actually supposed to be gloomy and cloudy and the other days were supposed to be sunnier, and I feared for a dramatic shift of lighting in the video and therefore ruining the illusion of real time passing by. Luckily, the day turned out to be sunny and no visibly dramatic shifts in lighting were recorded.